Tell me is he worth it.

Tell me is he worth it, do tell me my dear.

I've been the one who whipes away all your little tears.

Tell me is he worth it, your crying on the floor.

I've been the one just waiting for you to show him the door.

 

Do tell me I have been stupid,

Did I end all your fears.

Do tell me I'm a fool,

Did you like what I did my dear.

 

Tell me is he worth it, When he beat you black and blue.

You know this would have been better if you told me who.

Tell me is it worth it, when he hit you in the face.

You know this would be easy if you ran away to my place.

 

Do tell me I have been stupid,

Did I save you from your fears.

Do tell me I'm a fool,

Did I make them blood smears.

 

Tell me is he worth, now hes dead on the floor.

You know this would have been easy if you showed him the door.

Tell me is he worth it, I wont whipe your tears.

You know this could have been easy if you listend my dear.

 

So tell me I've been a fool to fall inlove with you.

Reviews

[Judas Hammer]

wow very real. I like the tempo and I like the message. Very real and well penned. Great write

[Maimai]

This peom has a good flow. I've been in this situation of loving someone who is with someone who doesn't deserve them. Good peom :)

[joshua deathdealer]

Nice flow and great expression. I love twist of you falling in love with the victim. Excellent write.

[Babieegirl]

wow, very powerful.. and so scary.. this would be a great screenplay of some sort... Made into a short movie clip.. I can picture doing it so clearly.. hahaha (=

[London]

this is really good, i love the flow of your words, and the intensity behind your words

[TJ]

Strong and very melodic piece. Retribution is always a good theme. Its sad to see people remain in poor relationships like this one, sometimes we wishe we could just step in and save them

[NeonWolves]

I love this! Its powerful and raw. The way you wrote it, I pictured a boy standing covered in blood with a knife in his hand, half singing and half talking, to a girl about it. It gave me a shiver~ As always greatt job!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Love this poem, very deep indeed and a bit haunting and bit romantic on some level.

Awesome work:)

[guiltyascharged]

AWWWWW! This is so cute! And sad. But I love it! I don't know how to describe it, but this shows that somebody out there really would kill another for you. Love so does conquer all! A great write!

[brenda]

nice really nice i like it !:)