Have You Ever Heard Of A Tale So Tragic

Have you ever heard of a tale so tragic,

One that wouldn't even be fixed by magic?

Two young girls one pretty one bold,

There hands together in one tight hold.

One fine night just gone past ten,

They were torn apart by a boy named Ben.

He told them there friendship wasn't right,

That right there started the fight.

No one knew how the fire broke out,

Nobody could hear the girls shout. 

They locked themselves in one last embrace,

This might just be there final chase.

There hands locked tightly together,

This is how they'd stay forever.

There lips together one last kiss,

This is one thing they would surly miss.

The house of flames,

To Ben was just one big game.

For that house to be there heavenly grave,

No matter what they wouldn't be saved.

But Ben broke in and took the Pretty,

This to Bold was such a pity.

This is a tale how one life was saved,

By a boy named Ben who was just a slave.

Two young girls there love a sin,

Which was now just thrown bin.

Have you ever heard of a tale so tragic,

One that wouldn't even be fixed by magic?

Two young girls one pretty one bold,

There hands together in one tight hold.

Author's Note

Okay the start of this just came to me... I dont know If I've heard it before but it was cool. Bad spelling? probably. This is kind of lame but.. Yeah.. x3

Reviews

[TJ]

loved the format and flow of this one. I love rhyming poems for the reason thay they flow so well when done right. I think this particular poem told a great story, i think the story is its strongest component. If there were spelling errors I didn't notice them, which mean the poem was just that good

[NeonWolves]

The imagery is breathtaking. Deffinatly a new favorite. It flows, it has nice rythem and its just all around great.~

[Babieegirl]

this one is definitively going in my favorites. that's all i have to say

[brenda]

and this story can still happen in school high school i really had not heard a story like this first time it probably one of those bedtime stories you can transform these story in scary stories or how you just did inspiring nice job!:)

[joshua deathdealer]

Its great. I like it. The rhythm is on and it flows very nicely.