Would it be wrong to.

Would it be wrong to end his life,

Would it be wrong to use a knife.

Is it wrong to want him dead,

Is it wrong to cut off his head.

 

He held my hand with the lies he says,

He made us wed on a sumer day.

How i hate his soul and life,

Tonight i will end it with a knife.

 

 

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Love the darkness here, with the ryhming adding some hard bite!

ps remind me never to cross you! Just kidding!

[MiidniightSoul]

A dark and emotional poem. It's also very well written. You express an intense hatred towards a person who made you suffer and inflicted you with pain. Nice work.

[joshua deathdealer]

I love the darkness and it flows very well. Excellent work.

[Sukriti Suki]

dark dark...the rhyme works to create the dark effect even more..nice.

[Hello, Goodbye]

love the dark narrative and the nice usage of brevity.. curiosity as to who is the death receiver is clearly invoked..

[NeonWolves]

I like this. Its dark and it just flows really well. Great job.

[Babieegirl]

I don't know why i read this likea dr. suess poem, untill the 2nd verse. (x I liked it, though.