Piano

Universe black with starlight luster,
Teeth sing out loud,
Thousand organized voices,
Aligned with perfection.

Touched by musical fingers,
Sound pure as a choir,
Brought to life by temptation.

Reviews

[DiMar4u]

beautiful, the gentle symbolism entering into my imagination

[DiMar4u]

The idea of breathing life into an inanimate object..love it. To look out at the world and feel a connection, to give 'Id' and persona to the lifeless is, to me, to acknowledge the true nature of the cosmos: consciousness. Everything is alive, there is consciousness in everything. "..touched by musical fingers"....I hear 'fingers that value/appreciate' what is being touched..as in giving love to every moment and embedding love in every action-

Less is more..no doubt.
I hear so much inferred in so few words,
I enjoyed this one sis,
Thanks for sharing!

[rosemary keogh]

Very nice. :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

There is a subtle hint of sensual tones...I love the metaphors connected with the piano... temptation brought on by musical fingers... Lovely write!!