The most beautiful experience

The most beautiful experience

A Poem by Sage
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A short piece of writing on the momentary glances we share with loved ones.

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So much can be said in a glance, such alluring efflorescence. Like the affinity of fireworks, diving deep into the sky illuminating the darkness. For an electric yet humble space of time, the eye unveils itself; revealing the rabbit hole of the human soul, enlightening you with the purest form of beauty.

© 2015 Sage


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Sage
I would love all feedback and criticism. I have just started my passion for writing and I can use all the miracle grow I can get. Thank you, :)

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Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind and encouraging words :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


'Revealing the rabbit hole of the human soul'-- FANTASTIC line!! This is a very connective piece, please keep sharing 😊

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Added on March 20, 2015
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Tags: Eyes, beauty, love, poetry, poem

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