The breaking

TW another poem about my girlfriend

TW!!!

She was a delicate flower, wilting in the shadows

Petals of sorrow falling, unnoticed by the world

A fragile soul, burdened by the weight of existence

Drowning in a sea of despair, she sought solace in the unknown

Her laughter once filled the air with joyous melodies

But now, only echoes of her pain linger in the silence

The sparkle in her eyes faded, leaving behind emptiness

As she danced with her demons, longing for peace

In the depths of her despair, she found the only escape

A permanent solution to her temporary anguish

Her final breath whispered secrets of her torment

Leaving behind a shattered world, searching for answers

The memories of her linger like a haunting melody

A bittersweet reminder of the girl who once lived

In the gentle embrace of the wind, her spirit lingers

A solemn reminder of the fragility of the human heart

Author's Note

TW!!

a poem I wrote last year

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

Depression is the very devil. I saw it many times during my career, and I would not wish it on my worst enemy.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

shades of Sexton and Plath within these lines....
j.

[Vagi]

this poem is story of many people around the world!

[Blooming Flower]

This is really moving, you depicted everything beautifully for such a dark topic.