05.

Chappie 5

 “Hello, Brooklyn
Hey, LA
Take the streets all night
'Cause we sleep all day
When the world comes crashing down
Who's ready to party?
Hello, Brooklyn
Hey, LA
Coast to coast
I'll take you down in flames
Let the good times roll
We can let go
Everybody knows
There's a party at the end of the world” 




I could not help but smile at that last line it was so funny!



I smiled as I held that picture again, it brought back so many memories, and I closed my eyes and felt a flashback coming:



There was a girl and a boy.
The girl was I the boy was Sebastian.
We were chasing each other around a huge field 
“Haha can’t catch me Stormy!” Sebastian yelled, I laughed and chased him around a bit, “Slow down!” I yelled, he laughed.



I finally caught up with him; I jumped and wrapped my arms around his neck in a hug, “oh!” He said, falling to the ground, I followed, laughing like crazy.



We lay in the grass, my head rested on his chest.
“I love you Storm” He said, pressing his lips to my head, I laughed and rolled over on my stomach, so I was facing him, “I love you too” I whispered, I pressed my lips to his, I was going to savor this kiss forever.



~End Of Flashback~ 







I opened my eyes I felt a tear escape.
I wiped it away with the back of my hand, I hated him, yet every time I thought of him, I wanted to be with him. 




“Once again Storm, you contradict yourself” I thought, I sighed and got up off of my couch, today had been long in some ways, in others, it had been short as hell. 





I walked into my bedroom and sat the picture down on my bed, I sighed once more and looked at it, how happy we looked, I was ready to cry, like how I did so many nights before, but I held the tears in this time, why? Even I cannot answer that.

Author's Note

Yup, yup yup, 5th chappie

Reviews

[Misa]

Okay, I'm gonna be blunt. The grammar could be fixed, it's easily ignored but it's bothersome. The flow of the piece is choppy and the breaks in between the paragraphs ruin the already choppy flow. I think if things were explained in richer detail and it was more rounded the piece could be better. I don't really understand what was going on the entire time I was reading because it did start abruptly and shift from thought to thought abruptly. You might want to explain a lot and put in a lot of detail for the piece to flow and be more readable. It has an okay concept and I would like to read more! : )