[untitled]

 

 

 

When we met our lives weren’t going great

 

we both wanted something better

away from all the sadness and hate

wishing for someone to stop are our eyes from getting wetter

then we found each other

 

 

(chorus)

I came to your side and there I’ll stay

I’ll be there to help you through this life

helping you until my dying day

I’ll be there when life comes at you like a knife

even till the end I’ll always love you

 

 

At first we didn’t talk much

but you needed someone to be there

so I came to help but there was someone else

but he didn’t seem to care

in my mind I had a hunch

that you needed someone be there

you needed someone to care

(chorus)

 

When he made you sad I could always tell

You’d try and hide it behind your lies

I never bought the s*** you tried to sell

I tried to comfort you as best I could

But still I had watched everyday as part of you died

(chorus)

 

But then I reached the breaking point in my head

All the things in my life broke loose

I thought I would end it end the pain

My thoughts killing me like a noose

except a thought of you

A thought of you made me want to live again

 

You came to my mind when I needed someone

You helped me when I thought I’d end with a bullet

You were the one who made it so I didn’t feel alone

Even though you never knew it

You are the reason I’m alive

 

And then he left you

But I stayed and tried to help take your pain away

How was I supposed to know what to do

But I tried

though the damage he had done was there to stay

But I tried

(chorus)

Till the end I’ll always love you

 

Reviews

[Jacey Poison Girl]

This is a pretty good song great job

[EdgeOfDark]

Hi Standing Alone! (Why is it that there are so many on this site standing alone?)

Interesting song. At first I found it hard to find a beat, but then it was there, and your prose fit it perfectly. Very evocative and substantive piece, and it felt real, and truthful. Well done.

[StarSandwich]

:) Not bad at all.

[Kiari Sabon]

not bad i like it

[brenda]

sweet it made me cry this is beautifu!:)

[Shy Girl]

It's a nice piece. To get to such a low point and then to have somebody whom actually picks one up of the floor, that's one amazing human being and very strong to be able to give such strength and act like it's just something you do for someone. I agree with Maya Storm, you should play it, it is a great song. :)

[Maya Storm]

This is a sweet song. I'd like to hear it played. YouTube perhaps?

[Ashli The Amazing]

very nice i really enjoyed it [:

[Coffee Vampier]

Is it weird to say that you love someone even if you have never met them?
Well i love this girl for saving for saving my best friend
in turn she saved my own life
I am forever grateful

~Alice~