Company

"Success ,sempre, prevails the working ethic"

 

you can' t hold a company in default if

it doesn't hold a clue as to the shadow scaffolding

falling down along the Notre Dame. Writing

on bank statements giving all the risk these days as TBS vultures

glide about their telescopic visions picking up all these indescretions

of character. I over playing a character thru these words, a better of sorts,

one whose filed all the questions away to become detached once more. Lost on the aMT decision to sacrifice a future these moments when everything

is perfect.

            A baby screaming toothails next door thin walls. Asking the

question that this is poetry , as if everything was motion.

Just a collection of symbols put together to spark imagination

            left right

a horse chewing cud wondering what coca would feel like .

            no left towards God's Epelitic fits

buring the nostrils. this is definantly doing something.

Time loss

            & they told me to dance.

Author's Note

Tear this apart...

Reviews

[Anna Auel]

I confess that there are parts of this piece I don't understand, but overall I find this poem engaging and intriguing and especially like phrases like "a baby screaming toothails" and "a horse chewing cud wondering what coca would feel like."

What I got from it is that there are so many incongruities to life, and yet we are told to dance along. I prefer writing poetry--even if some of it is nonsensical--to cope with the world's madness...and it seems so do you. Nice job.

[Raven Starhawk]

A fitting title for a poem that sings beauty. The element of life you so gracefully wove into this is astounding and a piece of importance I think some forsake.