twenty two

A quick haiku for the competition

Zoom you sick f****r

telling his title of beauty

adrift on the road.

Author's Note

Tear this apart

Reviews

[Brittany DeFranco]

I like to continue my haikus, look at Devotion to You and Sacred Place to see what I mean, but this is good and powerful like Jaco said ^_^

[((Teenage_Poet_Loser))]

only three lines, but yet so powerfull =]