You Said So?

everybody knows

Out with the old and in with the new,

Is that how it goes, it that what we do?

Should I just give up because it is said by you,

I can't do that, then our love would of never been true.

Reviews

[Solst Rapture]

I can understand what you're trying to say here. I think a few errors conceal the message but it is easily resolved.

Out with the old and in with the new,

Is that how it goes, it that what we do? [this line is not written right. Perhaps you mean is it what we say, or do!]

Should I just give up because it is said by you, [Would it be better if you said 'because you say...]

I can't do that, then our love would of never been true. [otherwise our love wouldn't have been true?]

It needs work but you have a message that's worth telling. This is how I'd do it.

Out with the old and in with the new

my dreams fade and become replaced by you

Is that how it goes?

Should I just give up because you say

I can't do it?

Then our love wouldn't have been true,

would it?