It Would Appear

Missed Love

As I lay with thee and smile,

It feels like it's been a while

Since we've held one another in our arms,

Caressed each other without any harm

Then I awoke to find you not here,

I had that beautiful dream again, it would appear.

Reviews

[Joseph - Michael]

That is a very impressive piece you've written there. So small, yet it mean a real great deal. We all wish we could just stay in the dream forever, but if you could just think about it for a second; Life is a dream until awaken from the death... Excuse me, but that's what it seem like to me...

On the other hand, it's still really great tho...

[Stacy]

Thank you for the reviews. It is a real life poem and something that all can relate to.....well, mostly all.

[bluessadmood]

Caressed each other without any harm
Then I awoke to find you not here,
lovely words ,is it that strong love ,beautiful thing that,you began even to imagine him while he is not there,how lovely ,oh yes love can do that and more,this is so well written ,i really loved it

[DoucheFuck;;]

Awh.
This is cute!
I'm sure that everyone in the world can relate to this.
Personally, I know I can.

Its well done.
Simple, to the point.

Good job.