Hold Onto The Lost

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Hold onto the lost so it may be found,
May you always hang on and things will come around
If we let go to soon, then there will only be hurt,
Yet if we hold on to much there we lie in the dirt
The middle ground is uneasy and no one can guide,
Think of the ones and things in your life that have died
Do not let that thinking get you down,
You'll hold onto the lost so the lost may be found.

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[Kristin Brecoe]

nicely written. i think you stand a good chance in my contest. =]

and third line... it's too soon. just a little typo. just thought id offer that. in case i have to get very picky about who wins.

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Morality is a fact of life and will always come when least expected, yes embrace the memories of the ones who passed on with happiness and live today.

Your words express these sentiments nicely, well written.