You Know Who You Are

My heart..............

How I feel, you might not care,

It matters to me and you won't dare

You won't dare to feel what I do,

As if you did then you'd love me too.

Reviews

[Pax Analog]

Smart sharp song verse! Challenge to actual empathy, the age-old lover's lament. This is so dang sing-able that if I had a tin can and string connected to ya right now, I'd make you smile with an impromptu vocal to your song beginning! Gotta sleep now; was up too late cyber-bantering.

It's either a wider haiku or a song snippet, but it's cool! Cheerz!

[J.Black]

Excellent!

[alyssa]

short and sweet! among one of my fav types of peoms... such little lines could mean sooo much!!!!!!!!!!! keep writing
alyssa

[dark and twisty]

a short, sharp take on the one-sidedness of love..

you won't dare feel what i do - especially like that line..sometimes i feel that way too, that people arn't open hearted enough, courageous enough to return the love of those who do love them...they are mired in shallow superficial expectations and social norms and wind up allowing what could have been that one rare opportunity of great love bleed into nothing...