The Ring

Inspired by Rivendell [Lords of The Rings Ost]

As they took their ring in hand,

A walk ensued throughout the land

They had stood together true and tough,

As the battles became fierce and rough

The help received was of great appreciation,

For the travelers had many trials and tribulations

They managed to get through the danger,

Not without some lures and strangers

As they approached the long awaited destination,

Their smiles grew with anticipation

The end was now finally here,

The ring was destroyed and with it the fear.

Reviews

[Cassandra]

I like this. A nice fanciful poem .. I wasn't a fan of the Lord of the Rings movies, and I've yet to read the books .. but you summarized it short and sweetly here :) I like the flow of this and the rhyme scheme. Nice work...its refreshing to come across a poem about fantasy and not the emotional stresses we all go through.

[John Stussy]

Oooh, good poem off of that song, and excellent summary of that story. Best of luck with the contest.

[Wolfwind Words]

Very well writen, this flowed well, and got the story across very nicely!
Good job!