chipping away

Tired of the pain and the destruction, mentally fighting with no luck when,

The world around me is in a tranquil place,, sometimes, I feel that peace may only fulfill me if I embrace, 

But how? when the darkness has no form, just an emotion promoting harm, taking away my sanity. Desolant..

 

Even if I could no one would hear the sound, of the alarm voicing from my silence, an island I envy because even it has life, so with a constant fight I seek out mine. 

Reviews

[Jessica Lynn Polley]

Wow I love this poem. Not only does it portray a sense of being lost, but also the idea that no one ever taught us how to find it...what ever it may be. There is desperation, anxiety, and somehow hope in this poem all at the same time...it shows a fear of never achieving but also an unwillingness to give up. Wonderful range of emotions here love it.

[Samuel Robert Sands]

Thank you !

[Relic]

Embracing that kind of darkness never amounts to much even if there seems no other alternative.

[Nathan Spark]

This is really inspiring. Thank you!