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A Poem by Srushti

Long distant relationships
There are people in love, who don't make love every weekend.
There are people in love, who don't go on dates every month.
There are people in love, who have to save up for months just to hear their better half's voice.
There are people in love, who are 2304 f*****g miles apart, yet always together in thoughts.
There are people in love, who don't cheat, even if their love isn't around.
There are people in love, who're surviving years without their partner.
There are people in love, waiting for that one day, when they won't have to say goodbye, only "goodnight"s and "good morning"s.
There are people in love, who understand, who don't demand gifts, who stay loyal even if they aren't sure if their other half is true, who are patient, who sacrifice everything, just for a glimpse.
And believe me people, these are those people who truely know what love is.

© 2017 Srushti


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I want to believe this is a loving defence for those hardest of relationships; the distance relationship, but instead it reads (to me) like a lover who feels the need to reassure the 'other half' - to convince them - perhaps to keep them on board as to any plans.


Posted 7 Years Ago


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I agree, people are in love. but i question, do they keep loving?
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A relationship between lovers in my opinion is like a perfectly balanced weighing scale, this balance is obviously achieved by love. Now it shifts with hardships. If the right is angry the left tries to ignore or make amends but how long can this carry on every one has a limit, a threshold. And there will be a day when they will fight and one or both will mention their sacrifice and with that, the relation becomes fragile and at most times is lost. If you say, they don't stop ignoring each other and don't resolve there problems the love is going become a prison. And then there are these beautiful creature called friends, they of course find a way to share their opinion. they are fools, like me but some listen to these fools. Its just my opinion. the poem made me think so, well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I want to believe this is a loving defence for those hardest of relationships; the distance relationship, but instead it reads (to me) like a lover who feels the need to reassure the 'other half' - to convince them - perhaps to keep them on board as to any plans.


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 6, 2017
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Srushti
Srushti

Kota, Rajasthan, India



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