Our

About OUR caretaker and OUR soul

Our

Your very first lover, 

She is your only favour 

She, gets little bigger,

When you are born newer

 

She fills your hunger,

And saves you from danger

You got a fever? 

She is the only saviour 

 

Judges like a lawyer,

Cares lot like a doctor

Thinks a bit deeper,

As, solution to be clearer

Eats like a dieter,

Speaks boldly like an orator

Prays like a preacher,

Sleeps always like a boulder 

We get better, better,

As she gets weaker, weaker

She, Is your mother,

First company to your father

Can describe her further,

But, Words can't be a filler

Care for her!

Die for her!!

Live for her!

And, support her!!

Author's Note

Thanks for reading my poem. Do suggest your ideas, corrections and comment your views :) ( ignore grammar problems :P )

"Our" is my first poem.. I'll decrease my errors in forthcoming publishings.

Reviews

[Vinaya M]

that is a perfect piece of art :)