In a dream, I walked naked through a shimmering valley, high in the sacred mountains of a distant world. The air was warm and moist; the ice I trod upon sparkled like precious jewels. As I neared the precipice, I became intoxicated with joy. Suspended high above me in a liquid azure sky, three golden suns drenched my perfect body with benevolent rays of pure liquid love. I am the sun, the prism, and the rainbow. I am soul, child of God, resplendent, perfect and free.
You create a very good vision with your positive and beautiful words. We need to appreciate what we have and who we are. Each of us can do great things if we open our heart and minds to hope and dreams. I like the ending to the outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote
A very vivid write...But I wonder if perhaps a little more development is needed; it's so good that I want more !
Maybe develop the feeling of joy possibly.
Still very good though ! :)
x
The last two lines are stunning and profound. This was a wonderful way to describe being a child of God. The mythical feel in this poem pulled me in and the details are suburb.
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