Liquid azure sky

Liquid azure sky

A Poem by Sri Gawn Tu Fahr
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The higher I fly, the deeper I get.

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In a dream, I walked naked through a shimmering valley, high in the sacred mountains of a distant world. The air was warm and moist; the ice I trod upon sparkled like precious jewels. As I neared the precipice, I became intoxicated with joy. Suspended high above me in a liquid azure sky, three golden suns drenched my perfect body with benevolent rays of pure liquid love. I am the sun, the prism, and the rainbow. I am soul, child of God, resplendent, perfect and free.

© 2011 Sri Gawn Tu Fahr


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Such sweet and bold imagery you have woven. I love this its got me thinking and pondering. You have me speechless.

Posted 13 Years Ago


very deep imagery! i'm in awe :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You create a very good vision with your positive and beautiful words. We need to appreciate what we have and who we are. Each of us can do great things if we open our heart and minds to hope and dreams. I like the ending to the outstanding poem. Thank you.
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Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful with perfect words and picture!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow! this is incredible!
so beautiful!!


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

And I am LOVIN this poem! What wonderful images this brought forth..
How very inspiring this was.. Your pen does flow gentle as a breeze.

Mags xx


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So beautiful. You should consider writing an inspirational book. Each of your nuggets are so uplifting and inspiring.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very vivid write...But I wonder if perhaps a little more development is needed; it's so good that I want more !
Maybe develop the feeling of joy possibly.
Still very good though ! :)
x

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The last two lines are stunning and profound. This was a wonderful way to describe being a child of God. The mythical feel in this poem pulled me in and the details are suburb.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sri Gawn Tu Fahr
Sri Gawn Tu Fahr

Nelson, British Columbia, Canada



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Facebook's Mystic of Mayhem, author of Love's True Home, romantic poet, troubadour, philosopher, inspirational writer, lyricist, comic, upbeat, adventurous! I am not a saint, master, savior or redeem.. more..

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