I wanna drink all your juices

You're a big hunk of chocolate, melting into the sun, I'm an eager tofu dog, and you're my warm, happy bun.

You're a seething volcano of hot liquid fire,
and I aim to quench your every desire.
I wanna drink all your juices,
and feast on your flesh,
kiss your all over,
this is my wish.
I wanna dive deep in your eyes,
hold your hand as we fly high,
as I love thee completely,
while you whimper sweet sighs.

Reviews

[Farrah Grahm]

chock full of eroticism. Simple and sweet. :)

[.]

see the title caught my eye, delightful, you have me overdrive..

[Claws Of Fury]

Oooooo la la. Very very veryyyyyyy thirst quenching. Love the words----i thought the poem being this short was perfect.

simplistic and right to the point. perfect.

[Vaidehi]

:)

[Bertie]

Wonderfully mouthy words you have used, it's lovely to speak what you've written...
Apart from I question as to whether the rhyming may be too strong for this kind of writing ? I don't kmnow though...
I still loved it :)
x

[Poetic Beauty]

this is a loving and sensual poem that takes us into a private moment.

[.]

hot!

[Helen]

Well.... when you put it that way.... NO simply just becomes two letters that should never come together... :-)

Phew... Meltdown!

[KAREN]

Hot and steamy! Love the flow and imagery!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

so lovely!