My heart’s one desire

my heart is a boat, and your love is my ocean, I wanna sail forever, in your liquid emotion.

Your heart is all shiny,
sparkling and bright
Your eyes,
constellations bringing joy to the night
Your smiles,
streaming comets,
your hair,
liquid fire,
Woman, thou truly are my heart’s one desire.

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A nice, short and perfect piece that swells with feeling, well done

[Farrah Grahm]

I like this the most, of everything I've read by you :) great job

[Vaidehi]

Very nice. :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Ahh your woman must have red hair. I really enjoyed the way you described her in this piece and how you feel about her. It make me smile to see such passion.

[emmajoy]

That last line says it all ..

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really cool and lovely at the same time, especially since you put it all in one short poem!

[KAREN]

Great rhyme and flow, romantic!

[Miss Fox]

How romantic :) I can see her as a celestial goddess.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

a beautifully romantic piece :)

[LA Lorena]

this is lovely, a perfect tribute to the one you love. well done!