Dark gooey puddle

Inspiration is a magic elevator in your heart. What floor are you on? Or have you already blown the roof off your mind and set yourself free?

Are you feeling befuddled,
or slightly bemuddled?
Does it feel like you’re standing in a dark gooey puddle?
Leap out of that hole,
and fling off your boots!
Climb up that tree,
and gobble down fruits.
I see you there smiling,
perched way up high,
free as a bird,
bright sun in the sky.

Love's True Home

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I could use a tree with fruit. I would climb and plan my escape. A positive poem with a very good ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

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inspirational read

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

So lively! Love it!

[KAREN]

Nice use of words here, great imagery.

[Sukriti Suki]

Come out of the gooey puddle and gobble fruits...I like the way you penned this.

[Poetic Beauty]

I like the imagery that is painted in this poem. It is like washing away the dreariness and letting the sun shine in.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Slightly horrific and plain candor, an epic prose within a few lines, well done, great read.

[arlery]

Very inspiring. I really like it.

[Vaidehi]

Very inspiring.