Obedietron

If you're feeling unruly today enjoy it: it means that no one can rule you.

If you swim in your heart,
til your mind is all gone,
you'll no longer be an obedietron.
you'll taste good ole freedom,
like never before,
wave good bye to your fears,
as they fall through the floor.

Reviews

[Anicca]

I like this. I dont know why but I find strength in peices of writing such as this. Its almost a 'f**k you, I can do this despite you, not because of you' moment. I needed that. Thanks, a very nice job.

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

I;mm assuming your obie word, is your word for not being obedient. If so, a very clever use of wording. I like;
'Swim in your heart till your minds all gone"