Hot Liquid Love

I didn’t think I could get any higher 'til my heart dove into the depths of your fire.

hot liquid love,
pouring down from the skies,
splashing into your gorgeous, star speckled eyes,
my heart blows wide open,
and cries out in delight,
the light of you blinding,
so warm and so bright,
I'm a heavenly feather,
floating high, and so free,
drowning deep in your heart,
love's sweet ecstasy.


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Reviews

[Abhishek Ramkissoon]

awesomeness. thats all i can write. i really love this.

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong words and powerful emotion in this poem. Your words are true. When the love is good. A very good night. A very strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sukriti Suki]

good one!! You rhyme, you use amazing imagination...though I am wondering if this much romance and love could actually be sustained...from a poetic point of view I loved it.

[Vaidehi]

Loved the last 4 lines a lot!!!

[Sri Gawn Tu Fahr]

I love the way you blush.
You bring the whole world to a hush!
No need to pull, no need to push,
You're love's a mighty loving rush.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Damn, I felt as if I was going to explode pink hearts and rainbows. Although I feel it is right for all of us to love, and be loved, taking it down a notch is not always a bad thing.

[LA Lorena]

what other emotion could make one feel so much? nicely done Gawner!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

THIS IS SOOOO AWESOME!!! I

[Sri Gawn Tu Fahr]

Thank you for wonderful comments ♥