I wanna wrap myself around you

We twist, and shout, and scream and fly, then dive into each other eyes.

I wanna know what's deep inside you,

I wanna flow through your blood and ride you,

I wanna sleep in your heart,

and drown in your eyes,

unwrapping every sweet surprise.

I wanna wrap myself around you,

like a vine of love,

my precious dove,

I wanna know what's deep inside you.

Reviews

[Vaidehi]

:)

[Sri Gawn Tu Fahr]

Thanx for your kind, loving comments (((❤)))

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Very strong imagery, and quick, stripped flow of time. A poem that will either speak to the hearts of those in love, or bask with the cannibals of this world. Well done.

[Madison A. Wright]

LOVE IT!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. The words were strong and the desire of the poem written with a polite movement making the desire alive and powerful. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

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truly a romantic affair..your muse and pen are delightful together

[Colleen C Dunphy]

I love the topic, the flow, the word choices. Very beautiful and moving.

[Sukriti Suki]

Nice one..Sensual..I like how it ends the same way it begins.