The Second Belief

The Second Belief

A Poem by Sr.phil
"

once a lovely land...

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The Second Belief

January is on its way
Our third month is coming
Our smile is reaching expansion
The messages flow out so easy

Such a short time to fall in love
How can someone see their future?
How can someone believe this is real?
When someone is willing to put everything into it

When they share the deepest darkest secrets
When they cry while telling you a story
You notice it when you’re saying “I’ll see you tomorrow love”
Isn’t enough to satisfy the goodnight

Driving home away from your heart
Becomes the worst and unsafe habit
When living in different equations fill empty answers
You know you’re in love when your nails grow

Our fourth month is here.
Our fifth month has come.
Our sixth month has arrived.
We reached our second belief.

Phil

© 2009 Sr.phil


Author's Note

Sr.phil
this piece came a few months after i finished writing "the first test" hope you all like it. thanks

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This is something so raw and powerful, I can definitely relate myself to it, as I have been there....
I felt as if you left your heart open here and thus your words came out from your soul and heart so effortlessly here..
"You know you're in love when your nails grow" - This is so true and I thought of this only after reading this, but indeed I agree with it :)
Brilliant :)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Sr.phil
Sr.phil

El Monte, CA



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