Circle The Moon

A Poem

Circle the Moon

Clouds hovering above our souls
Float along like nothing is wrong
holding our entire movements
killing our disasters and arguments

why can’t we move along?
Sit upon the moon and write our story
Question this life and the horrible past
Make up our own conclusion's

We only get one life to live
One beat
One pulse
A second is worth two lifetimes

Steady as we go, not fighting
Never seeing an argument evolving
Just smiling and enjoying every moment
Stay in this time, live life

Climb up to the moon
Walk on its surface
Embrace the earth's beauty
Circle the moon
For this life will end soon

Reviews

[Jenny Davis]

Life is WAY too short! This is a lovely message...written very well! :)

[Crazy Cat Man]

beautiful piece

[Natalie C]

We only get one life to live
One beat
One pulse
A second is worth two lifetimes

This was such a wonderfully inspiring piece and you couldn't be more spot on with your message here, which you just seemed to bring forth in your brilliant soft words and extraordinary metaphors

Brilliant

[An Ordinary Woman]

I agree with the others, the imagery of this piece is wonderful. I absolutely love the last stanza...

Wonderful writing, Sr.phil

[Phil Sanders]

Terrific .. such lovely word imagery ....

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this is beautiful. great imagery.