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just a wish

Wishes and dreams

We met online thru a dating website.

And instantly there was  a connection between us.

LIke a wish, i hoped that you were for real.

Like a dream, I hoped that you would be what i needed.

On our first date, you radiated such warmth and honesty.

On our next date, you expressed care and tenderness.

Like a wish, you  were more than i hoped for.

Like a dream, you were so real and down to earth.

We met again and fell in to each others arms.

Like old lovers who have not seen each other in a long time.

And drowned in each other, losing our senses to our emotions and feelings for each other.

Then.

Fate intervened and took you away from me.

Back to your mother, your sister.

Who needed you more.

I felt lost.

LIke my wishes and dreams were just that.

Just wishes and dreams.

Just wishes and dreams....

the end.

sue therese boone, 3/7/09

 

 

 

Author's Note

For Ralph

Reviews

[SallyS29]

The poem describes a hopeful heart� it needs no explanation or reason why� it's what your feeling that's all that matters.

A second poem for Ralph� I hope it all works out... be careful...

[Robert Francis Callaci]

Lost dreams and wishes can always be found again- I sense a sadness and faltering hope in this piece as well as a pinch of anger or disappointment that the dream was interrupted by fates call.

This piece pulled me into your dreams and wishes which is what poetry is about- It made me long for my own long ago dreams....


my warmest
bob

[larryb]

Wishes and Dreams is what we live for love......very good write..

[Bear]

I hope you continue to have wishes and dreams and that one day many of them come true. Good write.
Sal

[Wicahpi]

A sad write, indeed.
Never give up the wish :)

[Wildecat]

This is very sad, my heart goes out to you, but I believe that there is someone for everyone. Nice write.