If I Died Tomorrow

If I Died Tomorrow

A Poem by Susan
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a brief poem about pain.

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If I Died Tomorrow

If I died tomorrow, would anybody notice.

If I died tomorrow, would anybody care.

If I died tomorrow, would anybody come to my funeral services.

If I died tomorrow,  would anybody mourn me.

If I died tomorrow, would anybody grieve over me.

If I died tomorrow, would anybody miss me.

If I died tomorrow, would anybody take notice.

If I died tomorrow, would you cry.

If I died tomorrow, would you miss me.

If I died tomorrow, would you care that i was not in your life anymore.

If I died tomorrow, would i just be another statistic.

If I died tomorrow, would the world go on like I did not exist.

If I died tomorrow, would the world stop and mourn me.

If I died tomorrow, would I have made a difference in your life.

If I died tomorrow, would I have made a difference in anyone's life.

If I died tomorrow, Would you be there for me.

If I died tomorrow, know that i will be watching over you.

If I died tomorrow, know that I will be here waiting for you.

If I died tomorrow, know that I will always be here for you.

If I died tomorrow, know that i will always love you.

If I died tomorrow, know that you will always be in my heart.

If I died tomorrow, know that we will always be together.

 

the end.

by Sue Therese Boone, jan. 2009

 

© 2009 Susan


Author's Note

Susan
just expressing some pain and thoughts...

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Yes people would notice. I often ask these very questions of myself.
Good expression of emotion and self analization. I think it's only
human to ask these things on occasion. Especially when we are feeling
inadequate or unloved. I know this from personal experience, too.
Thank you for sharing, Susan.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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If you died i would be very sad ..i enjoy talking with you silly girl and im sure many many more would miss you also (BIG HUG).............

Your special friend
Larry

Posted 15 Years Ago


The questions many of us ASK... well done Susan... I hope the writing helped you vent your feelings and that you can go on with your head up and held high, showing the strength you carry within.

Sallie Bear

Posted 15 Years Ago


Yes people would notice. I often ask these very questions of myself.
Good expression of emotion and self analization. I think it's only
human to ask these things on occasion. Especially when we are feeling
inadequate or unloved. I know this from personal experience, too.
Thank you for sharing, Susan.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes I would notice. It is hard to review a poem like this. Whatever you are feeling I pray that it will pass and mae you a stronger woman. I hope writing this poem helped you get something out of your system? You will gain strength from pain. I got your prayers.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a beautiful poem, and If you died tomorrow I would notice, I consider you a very special friend. Well done Susan.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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