Sad songs

Sad songs

A Poem by Talesha
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"We are closer to them in songs..and I will always love colombian music"-TM

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Why do we love these sad songs?
This bring tears to our eyes,
I tried to stop,
I had several tries...

But I listen to the lyrics,
I think of my love,
And I become sad,
I think of what I have and had.

But these songs make us alive,
To want to touch heaven and the sky,
To dream of having them at out side.
Sad songs brings us closer to them.

© 2015 Talesha


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I agree dear Poet.
"But these songs make us alive,
To want to touch heaven and the sky,
To dream of having them at out side.
Sad songs brings us closer to them."
Old song can take us back to good days and and. I use music to make me create. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like this poem and the last line is really good "sad songs bring us closer to them" I only have one criticism and its just personal opinion. try and break the typical rhyming couplets now and again I think it would have a really good effect. but I enjoyed it overall just break free at some point

Posted 9 Years Ago


Talesha

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the advice..I greatly appreciate it. Glad you liked it.
Niall Madden

9 Years Ago

not a problem.

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Talesha
Talesha

Caribbean, Trinidad and Tobago



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About me? Well,I dream about love,curious about life after death.I have visions of a future that I'm not sure will ever happen,but I dream of them anyway.I have been broken-heartened,by my own blood a.. more..

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A Poem by Talesha