Love is...

Despite the inevitable failure and manipulation. I'm taking a chance. I choose to smile again,even if it's for awhile,because you bring that to me,sincerity or lies,it feels good to not cry. TM

It's like when you pour your heart out,

All your beliefs,your faults,insecurities and ugliness.

When you say all you want and hate,

How you believe in purity as much as your faith.

It's when you want someone to feel for you-

Love,feelings so strong,

But they don't,cause their clique,you don't belong,

It's when you feel more emotions through love songs.

When you are sick of being alone,

Homework,job and solitude,a comfort zone.

But no one gets it,they don't understand,

You're not a perfectionist,mere person with few demands.

Love is care in pain,

Swallowing pride when heart is strained.

It is the new found hope in tears,

When a new chapter is not feared.

It's when you secretly long for affection,

For you dream of love,a chance to be,

A chance for your soul,in depth to see.

It's when you can't help but smile,

It's when life is enjoyable,but not for a long time.

Can't focus, can't concentrate,

Everything is messed up,still in a happy state.

It's when there's doubts and fears,

Yet,one takes the risk,to inevitable love and hurt. Cheers!

Reviews

[Daniel Dawes]

Really nice and a good poem. Enjoyed your view on love and life :)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

WOW! Talesha your a very talented writer. Another outstanding write. Nicely written.

Kaze~ :-D

[Talesha]

Awww my favourite reviewer. Thanks a lot hun :) You're kindness always humbles me.

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome my friend. :-)

[Antonio Hernandez]

Talesha, I enjoy the complexity with which you describe love with. Even though I'm far from understanding love, reading things you write about generally make me believe for a moment that I am experiencing it first-hand. Good work. I don't see anything you would need to improve, other than possibly establishing a clear-compelling structure.

[Talesha]

Thank you for the lovely review. When you said,"Even though I'm far from understanding love, reading things you write about generally make me believe for a moment that I am experiencing it first-hand." You have no idea how good you made me feel.I'm so grateful that you feel as though you experience it. Thank you so much and God bless you.One day you will understand love :)

[Sanchari]

very well written with emotions wrenching out from each line. keep writing Talesha.

[Talesha]

Thank you for reading :)