Tears of the sky

 Drenched in the rain,

Wild and free.

No tears,no disdain,

All of life,this ugly stain.

Stain called a frown,

Tears inevitably forlorn.

Drop by drop,its cold thrills,

Rigorously on our body it spills.

Masking our hurt,

Rethinking destiny on earth.

Closes eyes to find peace,

Pretending the enemies are deceased.

Life's demons hover up and about,

Two-legged beings slender or stout.

Find solace in rainy dreams,

Somber reality,appreciate sunshine as it gleams.

Reviews

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

I agree with Frieda. Brilliantly written.

Kaze~

[Frieda P]

Cleansing rain, what's better than dancing, drenching yourself in this serene downpour...a peaceful dreamlike trance on your page...beautifully pen'd Talesha, love the sentiment here.

[Talesha]

Nicely pen'd review lady ;) Thank you so much..forever humbled.(:

[Antonio Hernandez]

It's got spice. I do like it. Personality, I've never been a fan of rain, so reading this new perspective of it gives me a new way of looking at it. I enjoy using the imagery to imagine all of the emotions and feelings caused by the rain, especially seeing as I think of rain as ambient tears.

[Talesha]

Antonio, I'm delighted of the new perspective you got.Nothing makes me more happier that the message of this poem was conveyed.Thank you for reading and your lovely review.I'm very grateful :)

[Justine]

I like the title and it gives a good introduction to the poem. The release of pain, anguish and despair comes through tears, as does the more positive aspect of joy, love, happiness. The "stain" of life - love that and "find solace in rainy dreams". A thoughtful write. JJ

[Talesha]

Justine,thank you for reading.I'm glad you like it.Truly humbled by your opinion.Take Care,God bless.