Love that Lasts

"Love is never always dreamy and carefree.It's important to treasure it at that stage.It helps to rekindle the flame later on." T.M

A Flame and Burning Coals
Young love is a flame; very pretty, often very hot and fierce, but still only light and flickering. The love of the older and disciplined heart is as coals, deep-burning, unquenchable."
(Henry Ward Beecher, quoted by Augusta Moore in Notes From Plymouth Pulpit, 1859)

Let's dance in the sunset,

You and I,

Let's release our tension,

Our limit's the sky.

Kiss me now,

Don't ever stop,

This a love story,

It can end abrupt.

I'll kiss you in the rain,

I'll tear petals for my aching pain,

I'll miss you every moment of everyday,

You'll change my mood,bad thoughts a bay.

Picnic by the beach,

Secrets,fears,emotions we'll preach

Communing with nature,you by my side,

Ever instinct inside tingles me to be your bride.

Kiss me in the sun,kiss me in the rain,

In my soul you have earned a pretty stain

Memories forever engraved,

Never assumed, like a gentleman you'd behave.

Let's dance in the sunset you and I.

Break us apart they'll never try.

With love this real,let's take it slow,

Hold me close and let's never let go.

Reviews

[Jack...]

This is truly beautiful, poetic love laced with nature and everything else that makes a heart sing. Very nicley penned my friend. I loved this.

[Talesha]

Oh,Thank you friend,I greatly appreciate it :) Bless you for your kind words.

[Talesha]

Thank you for your kind words,Frieda.I greatly appreciate it :-)

[Frieda P]

Your dancing sunsets were luverly. Very playful, just like the start of a new romance.