The Agreement

The second part of the story "Alive but Dead"

The vial would grant a life

But every price must be paid

For this is how this world works

"A life for a life"

"How to?"

"The vial will give her seven precious weeks

On those days she must find

A young lad and must capture his heart

'True love' as poets call it

With a dagger of bitterness

She must thrust it straight

Into his heart

The first blood that comes

Will answer the wish"

"That is easy"

"I almost forgot what you are

A daughter of necromancy

No intervention of dark magic

Must be done or else..."

The girl woke up on a daze

Unsure and in a blur

Her mother told her to get up

She must dress up, they're going on a ball

The thought of it was unsure

She was confused but her mother said:

"It's alright."

She hurried off on her heels

And was ready to go on try something

Something she knew she was forbidden to do

All her life

(to be continued)

Author's Note

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Reviews

[MrKnowAll]

Hi!
The story behind this poem, is really fantastic, I was sure, something is going to happen anysecond, so I will be following. I was a bit confused with all the apostrophes , so maybe clearing some of them with spaces and such make it easier to read.

Thanks for sharing!

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[Shaquana Adams]

This is a cute little poem. My only issue with it is the ending. It seemed like I was on the road to a climax or conclusion and then she wakes up and seems to start her own adventure. I don't know. Maybe I am just nitpicking because I have never read this type of poetry before. You should definitely continue it and request I read it when it's complete. Thanks for sharing, I definitely enjoyed it! :)

[Shaquana Adams]

Also, let me add that I did read part three after realizing this was only part two. But I'd still like more of the story :)

[Sporadic Soul]

HAHA. thank you2 so much for reviewing my work. It'll help a lot. :)