"Maybe death isn't linear,
Maybe it comes in waves.
Greeting us so silently
With a dreary haze." something about this seems very real, its something we won't know right away, like a creeper it comes.
Your poem explores between life, death, and the human consciousness, suggesting that death is not a singular event but rather a recurring presence that influences our lives silently and continuously.
Thank you, I really enjoyed reading your review. I was hoping my thought process wasn't too ambiguou.. read moreThank you, I really enjoyed reading your review. I was hoping my thought process wasn't too ambiguous on this one, but you got it exactly. Thank again c:
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I didn't want to rewrite it, but gosh does it bother me haha
I found this very interesting. I’ve found most don’t want to speak about death, even though it is inevitable for all of us. Thank you for sharing.
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I've found the same. I'm a bit of the opposite. I like to talk about it until I have an existential .. read moreI've found the same. I'm a bit of the opposite. I like to talk about it until I have an existential crisis. Different strokes for different folks. Thanks for reading.
"Maybe death isn't linear,
Maybe it comes in waves.
Greeting us so silently
With a dreary haze." something about this seems very real, its something we won't know right away, like a creeper it comes.
Your poem explores between life, death, and the human consciousness, suggesting that death is not a singular event but rather a recurring presence that influences our lives silently and continuously.
Thank you, I really enjoyed reading your review. I was hoping my thought process wasn't too ambiguou.. read moreThank you, I really enjoyed reading your review. I was hoping my thought process wasn't too ambiguous on this one, but you got it exactly. Thank again c:
1 Week Ago
*Thanks.
I didn't want to rewrite it, but gosh does it bother me haha