Fog

Fog

A Poem by Hallow

Maybe death isn't linear,
Maybe it comes in waves.
Greeting us so silently
With a dreary haze.

Day in and day out
A silent, quaint visit.
Harbinger of fate,
A talk we prohibit.

If we could just lift
The veil from our mind.
Perhaps, we'd converse
From time to bleak time.

A mask that's assumed,
Bore to me unto you.
Impatiently waiting
For a day that we rue.

© 2025 Hallow


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A very though provoking poem.

"Maybe death isn't linear,
Maybe it comes in waves.
Greeting us so silently
With a dreary haze." something about this seems very real, its something we won't know right away, like a creeper it comes.

Your poem explores between life, death, and the human consciousness, suggesting that death is not a singular event but rather a recurring presence that influences our lives silently and continuously.

Thanks for sharing, enjoyed this poem.
-Amy


Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hallow

1 Week Ago

Thank you, I really enjoyed reading your review. I was hoping my thought process wasn't too ambiguou.. read more
Hallow

1 Week Ago

*Thanks.

I didn't want to rewrite it, but gosh does it bother me haha
Amy R

1 Week Ago

You're very welcome, it was just right. :))



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I found this very interesting. I’ve found most don’t want to speak about death, even though it is inevitable for all of us. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hallow

6 Days Ago

I've found the same. I'm a bit of the opposite. I like to talk about it until I have an existential .. read more
A very though provoking poem.

"Maybe death isn't linear,
Maybe it comes in waves.
Greeting us so silently
With a dreary haze." something about this seems very real, its something we won't know right away, like a creeper it comes.

Your poem explores between life, death, and the human consciousness, suggesting that death is not a singular event but rather a recurring presence that influences our lives silently and continuously.

Thanks for sharing, enjoyed this poem.
-Amy


Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hallow

1 Week Ago

Thank you, I really enjoyed reading your review. I was hoping my thought process wasn't too ambiguou.. read more
Hallow

1 Week Ago

*Thanks.

I didn't want to rewrite it, but gosh does it bother me haha
Amy R

1 Week Ago

You're very welcome, it was just right. :))

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