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8/5/24

I just wish
I was a fish
I could forget
We ever met

You're a star
So very far
Onto the grass
I fell at last

Alone again
I fear, my friend
In this dark pit
Where I will sit.

Reviews

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

okay okay okay okay okay okay. the first two lines, 'i wish i wish i was a fish' i say that out loud unconsciously all the time. it's a phenomenon called word salad. i don't know what this means, but perhaps we are long lost blood brothers. it kinda freaked me out reading that and i'm sorry i couldn't get past the first two lines, but i hope you are doing good today bro.

[Hallow]

It's says. "I just wish," but I'm sure when I initially thought of it "I wish I wish" came to mind, haha. Could be, the universe is strange. Thank you, I think I am. Hope you're doing well too.

[Antifranticbabydoll]

It feels very lonely. A terrible feeling. Wishing the best. -M

[Hallow]

I wrote this a couple months ago, so, maybe I'm not quite as low as I was. Thank you, nonetheless.