The Random of You

 

Jazz saxophone tunes

    And midnight blues

Tornado days

-And you

 

Paper air planes

    And picnic rains

Smoke filled rooms

-And you

 

Tear shaped droplets

    And heart shaped lockets 

Helter-skelter views

-And you..

 

In the weightless

of the

    beautiful tragic

randomness

Author's Note

something a bit different from my usual

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

this is really quite interesting, it really says we all have our good and bad points... we just have to look at the good and see if it out weighs the bad when letting them into our life. Unique piece of writing... love it!!

[Summers Under The Old O..]

This is a really nice poem. In rhyming in the first two lines of the first two stanzas is very nice, but perhaps that should continued to the third stanza? The last stanza is nice, especially the ending with randomness. Nice work.

Summer

[~*The Writer In Me*~]

Good poem