Sweet Serene

Sweet Serene

A Poem by Spoken

 

She is sweet serene
the beauty of her sleek thighs
the real in her eyes
color of velvet purple
dipped in honey
she is queen bee
the master artistry
lady hip bohemian
calypso in the wind
I am she
and she my sweet serene

© 2008 Spoken


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I think you've got your groove on. . . this is so melodic, sweetly singing, hips swaying, Maya ANgelou would say it in her rich voice and give us all chills . . .

My favorite line

the real in her eyes

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh my so very seductive and passionate write... WOW now that made me tingle.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Love this! Yes, exotic and mysterious, sweet, and palatable...every woman should feel so sublime. Wonderful!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

lady hip bohemian
calypso in the wind

Some great lines in this piece. I loved it. Rain..

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

OMG! this a beautiful piece of poetry, I just loved the meaning behind this and the poem just floated right at the reader, terrific job Spoken.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Absolutely gorgeous poetry! I loved it ... hugs

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

"the REAL in her eyes"
omg I love that line

I loved the imagery here ; beautifully written
almost like a view of oneself through the looking glass
and seeing all the beauty held there;

my interpretation but either way - great write

*hugs*
laura

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Short and sweet. Was this written this way to stress the attributes of the writer? lol

the beauty of her sleek thighs
the real in her eyes

Great lines! loved it.

Mr.Lopez

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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