I'm perfect imperfection.

Inspired by Spoken Word's "Beautiful Woman"

Smooth, wide, full hips
that I hide from most.
Breasts to comfort,
Soothe, and tease.
Belly for holding,
touching, grasping.
Not like the models,
images on glossy pages -
instead soft, and curved,
rounded just a bit
here.. and there.
Past time to revel,
to praise each velvet
Imperfection.
To know that at least
I'm perfection
within me.

Reviews

[David Benson]

Ah the fiery one! Take joy in who you are and acknowledge no imperfections that you think others might wish upon you: If only because ... I would eliminate the words from Imperfection to I'm (Impefection.//To know that at least/I'm), and end this postively:

Past time to revel,
to praise each velvet
perfection
within me.

'Cause that's how I see it.

[Breadrun]

A very sexy poem, i like how you write about imperfection but still make the girl sound sexy, almost like a real woman :)

[Sunni Davis]

True beauty is not found on glossy pages but within ourselves. I love this poem!

[Lenard L. Banks III]

I wrote a poem with the same concept called They Vs. Me. Nice poem anyway I guess great minds think alike.

[Tommy]

Oh, it is the little imperfections and peccadilloes that truly makes love's perfection. Perfection is reveling in each other's flaws, and embracing them because they are part of what makes us who we are, and makes our loved ones who they are...Love loves imperfection ...

Great Write!
RLG,
Tommy

[Liza]

beautiful way to feel.