Inane

Inane

A Poem by SpitfireGrrrl

they all ask, how do you feel?
discordant, cymbals crashing
clashing with the sounds of
horns, and wooden instruments
that bellow mournfully
No really...
I'm fine.

© 2012 SpitfireGrrrl


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few words
tons of meaning
love the ending!!*)
thank you for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


SpitfireGrrrl

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
Quite a cacophany in normalcy isn't it?

Posted 12 Years Ago


SpitfireGrrrl

12 Years Ago

It is!
as if they could imagine the noises that crowd our day . . . i love this

Posted 12 Years Ago


SpitfireGrrrl

12 Years Ago

Thank you!
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. yes, they do ... they always do ... and there's no way what you've said can be said to them :P ... it would be nice if one could though, wouldn't it ? :P ... thank you for answering all those people in my life who ask ... i can't share this with them but this answer has to be one of the most precious ones that i shall store in a secret vault in my heart :) ...

Posted 12 Years Ago


SpitfireGrrrl

12 Years Ago

It would be nice to say it! Maybe one of these days, I will - just let the filter go! ;)
...

12 Years Ago

. hahahaha :D ... just the thought is so delicious :P ...
I have just discovered your work and am so impressed. It is so well written and evocative!

Posted 12 Years Ago


SpitfireGrrrl

12 Years Ago

Thank you again :) You've caused a blush. Much appreciated!
Shimmerbliss/CAF

12 Years Ago

I mean it! :)

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Dallas, GA



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I've been coming and going from here for a while now. I'll just... stop writing for a while and step away, then come back for a little while. :) It's been lots of fun reading all the new stuff from.. more..

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