Stranded

I cut the Rope

it was thick, knotted well

but I sawed through it

with blood on my hands

Tears in my eyes

I cut the Rope

the cord, the tie

that silken bond

that once held my

Heart

to your

Heart

it was surprisingly…

Difficult.

the pain wasn’t immediate

You see -

the rope Bled

gossamer drops that

when I Tasted, made me numb.

then it was Done.

I let you go, watched frayed ends

slip by in silence

while I held my own heart

Wounded, Bleeding,

Numb, Stranded.

Reviews

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Absolutely fantastic! The title works so well with this vivid and well penned piece.
I felt ever word...and, I know, I know.

[dukovan]

I read that your a part time writer full time reader. You seem to be influenced in a really cool way. I'd definitely encourage you continue writing. This is good stuff.

[SpitfireGrrrl]

Thank you! I'm a bit of a confessional writer - so it comes and goes :) Glad you enjoyed it!

[Distant horizons]

Wonderfully done, a very unique feel to your words.

[SpitfireGrrrl]

Thank you - I am definitely not very good at "traditional" writes! ;)

[Distant horizons]

:-)

[Emily B]

this is excellently written

[SpitfireGrrrl]

Thank you!