One Mind

A bit apocalyptic, a bit on the spot, a bit decent, a bit rough, even a bit poetic at times. But just a bit, nonetheless

Put a pen to my lips

And I will breath you a thousand swords

Ink blossoming life fire

Consuming the paper dolls of fear

Until the world burns

In the mind of one

Put a thought in my hands

And I will craft you a sky

Knowledge screaming like wind

Scattering the poison clouds of doubt

Until the world moves

In the mind of one

Put a blade in my back

And I will bleed you a new ocean

Life churning like water

Drowning the cold seed of treachery 

Until the world floods

In the mind of one

Put a hope in my heart 

And I will grow you a new home

Light unmoving like earth

Covering the pit of despair

Until the world's reborn

In the mind of one

Put my body in a box

And I will give you forgiveness

Scattered to nothing like the void

Lingering in the quiet of dreams

Until the world's forgotten

The mind of one

And it

Darkens

Drains

Calms

Dies

And remembers

Reviews

[Joanna Maharis]

Beautiful imagery throughout this piece that captures the heart and imagination. I also like the elements of philosophy throughout this piece.

[Legion]

Until...until...until...the mind of one knows.

Nicely done. Not sure the ending actually fits with the rest of the piece, but the message is clear none-the-less. Kudos.