Depth

Dreams, night, the beauty of subconscious.

Have you tasted 

the honey depth of narcolepsy?

Have you felt

the flickering sensation 

as your seditious soul 

fights and scratches 

to prolong its stay 

in the blind spectrum

of overlapping colors and shades?

Let your cells tangle

in the mesmerized dance of glances, 

fixated on the ever-changing

images and beauties. 

We are all visitors here,  

we are all wandering tourists

captured by the enchanting eyes

of the lady Luna

whose paralyzing beauty 

throws the world on its back

and stirs the powerful waves

of change. 

Her glow takes us to the eternity,

reiterating the soft lullaby

to our perfervid eyes.

She opens our crass minds.

She encourages our cowardly souls.

She brings restorations.

She offers life. 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Kahtia Howard]

I love how you are not ambiguous in your thought. There is very strong use of imagery which evokes sensation and feeling- more of a short journey than a read. Very well written

[A. Amos]

You're one deep soul and the best part is reading your poetry or stories, you invite your readers in your magical world... Consider me a fan and when you post new, kindly send me RR.. Simply amazed

[The Spirit Chaser]

Wow, thank you so much for this beautiful review. It means a lot when you hear something like that. I'm glad you like my work. :)

[Nix]

A very unique piece. Beautiful use of vocabulary. I like the lingering darkness that doesn't ever completely show itself but still leaves the piece with a feeling of uneasiness but beauty as well. Well done.

[The Spirit Chaser]

Thank you. :)

[Ai Lun]

I love the light gliding nature of the rhythm in this poem. Also the personification of the moon as lady luna works very well :)

[Erik Daniel]

Once again such beauty in the words you use. Amazing. #firsttoeverread!

[The Spirit Chaser]

Thank you, Erik. :)

[Sami Khalil]

"Her glow takes us to the eternity,

reiterating the soft lullaby

to our perfervid eyes.




She opens our crass minds."


A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:).........................

[The Spirit Chaser]

Thank you, it means a lot. :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)..............

[DeathHaze]

Love to read more of your work and keep writing :)