Vampire

  I run through the forest not looking back. I can feel the creature that was once my lover gaining on me. I don't want to feel his fangs on my neck, to feel hot blood dripping from my veins, to feel my life slowly die away. I can hear his tremendous footsteps on the ground,at my feet. I run harder and faster, not daring to look back. He catches me and I scream. I hear him whisper, "theres no pian, not much really." He opens his jaws and I begin to dry as I say, "Why? Why do this to me? What did I do? I thought you loved me." He only replies with a few simple words, "Oh but I do love you, and by doing this we can be together forever." With that he bites down and I cry out in pain as he slowly drains my life away. I can feel his ice-cold skin grow hot as he drains my life away.My vision fades and my world goes black.

   I awake to the bright moon shineing on my pale skin. Once again my past haunts me. It's been three years since that fatal night. I can't even remember his name. I left him after I awoke and found out to my horror that I was no longer human. I left him then. I never looked back. I sit up and sniff the air. The smell of blood is strong. I must hunt soon or I will starve. I get up and run off to the nearest town.

   When I arrive I see a man walking down the streets towards a woman. She has a scared look on her face while he has a grin. I hide in the shadows and wait for my meal. He creeps closer and as the woman turns a corner I leap out at him and lung for his neck. My jaw bites down on his soft skin as I feast on this rapist's neck. I can see all the wrong he has done, as I read what he had in mind. I drain him in fury and anger at what hes done to many young women. As his life becomes mine I solemnly think of how many I have killed and how many families I have hurt. I stop feeding on this dirty mans blood and run to the nearest building. A window is open and I look inside. What I find hurts me. I see a family sitting down for the evening meal. Oh how I wish I could have a family, but alas, I can't. I run from the image not looking back. Of course I should have watched where I was going because the next thing I know I bump into a man. I look up into the wonderful eyes of a young male. His eyes are dark brown and his hair a mop of a mess. "Oh I'm sorry miss,I didn't mean to run into you. I should have watched where I was going." "Oh no its my fault, I am sorry." The hunger starts to build as I stand next to this man. "I must leave before its to late, I am sorry." I turn to go when he grabs my wrist. "Oh do you stay, I'll buy you dinner. Its the least I can do." "Oh no please let me be." I run to the forest edge and I see he takes chase after me calling out to me to wait. I run into the forest and turn into my little clearing. I turn back expecting him to have turned around but instead hes right behind me. "Leave please. I don't want to hurt you." "oh but I do." With shock horror I hear the voice of my creator as he steps out of the shadows. "I have been looking for you for a long time. And I finally found you. You are my mate and no one elses, and this filthy human can be our snack to share." My creator steps closer to the man who ran after me. I lung at my creator and slam him to the ground. "NO!" I turn on the man and I sink my fangs into his delicate flesh. I drain only what half I should and turn him into what I am.I am mad at my selfish greed but it was the only way to save him. "Why did you do that?" he asks. "Because it was the only way. Now sleep." I turn to my creator and lung for his throat wanting to claw it out. I grab his neck as he grabs mine, I tear and claw at what I can. He begins to choke me as I tear him limb from limb. Blood pours from his ripped neck, as blood trickles down mine from his claws. I tear off his arm and he gives a howl of pain. "Why do you hate me so?" "because you created me and I didn't want this life." I claw at his underbelly and watch as his innards flow out. "Your not an immortal vampire anymore, I can kill you my own two hands." I tear off his legs and lung for his throat and drain what blood is left from him. "Why are you drinking from me?!?!?!?!" "Because, its my nature." As I drain him dry the man I had bitten comes to. I quickly finish. As I turnt o him he looks at me in shocked horror. "Is that what I am now? A monster?" "Yes." I reply. "I understand if you want to kill me but do me a favor and make it quick." "I will not kill you. I actually like this sensation. Let us go and feast on the humans of that town and drain them together." "Alright." So we run to the town and cause havoc and chaos. As we rip theri limbs of with ease and drain them dr of their sweet elixir. 

Reviews

[Story Keeper]

I like the story, except that toward the end her personality seems as evil as her creator. I thought she only fed from the wicked. The young man suggesting feasting on humans seems unlikely too, considering he was one only a few moments ago. Maybe some kind of transition period, before he becomes evil, if he must. Just a suggestion.