Shattered Love

My heart stutters,

The thought of you with others.

My heart is aching,

Forever breaking.

My love for you,

It’ll never be true.

One tear rolls,

My heart takes the toll.

Once again shattered,

Beaten and battered.

This poor soul,

Struggles in a dark hole.

Reviews

[Clouded in Hopeful Illu..]

This poem makes me curious. Why is it that the speaker's love for this person will never be true? And if it is not true, then why is their soul struggling or shattering? I think it would benefit the poem if you expanded just slightly more about either the loss that occurred, the love that occurred, or even why the speaker's love will never be true. This seems to be a thin layer over a much deeper meaning.

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[The Archangel Gabriel]

Beautiful as I remember your work. Short and to the point. A wonderful write.