Completed

summary of the story

   

    Great friends, good grades, and a wonderful family who loves her and never scolded her for playing video games. Who could complain? But something was missing; something was incomplete. Every day felt the same. Eiko went to school, talked with friends, and spent time with family" nothing ever changed. She wasn’t stressed out, wasn’t pressured, but why did she feel like something was missing? Why did her perfect life feel so boring to her? Just what was she lacking?

  One late afternoon, while playing a RPG game, Eiko met a stranger who helped her out when she was in a bit of a pinch. This mysterious person brought color to her dull life. She found him interesting, and they decided to chat. Soon, she began to look forward to their daily chats. Eiko felt comfortable talking with him and shared stories about her personal life. Suddenly, one day, he asked to meet her in person. She became afraid. What would happen if they met? What if he turned out to be someone she actually knew? Her older brother hinted at what she was missing in her life. But what was it? Did it have anything to do with the stranger she met in the game? Find out in the next chapter of “Completed.” (Coming soon! Hopefully.)

 

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems,and give me a review of what do you think of it?,or is it interesting?I give summaries before I write the story.I want readers to read my summary to see if they will enjoy reading the story or if it interest them?sorry if it might not perk your interest much,but I hope some people or even a few people will enjoy this,this is my first time typing a story online,so it might kind of suck,but I will do my best to make it enjoyable!Thank you for wasting your time on this story!I would like to appreciate on some reviews on this story.Thanks again!New edited version.I would like to thank my cousin for helping me editing it.

Reviews

[Lady Tyke]

Sounds like it could have potential. When I started reading I thought of Sword Art Online which is one of my favourite anime's. I love anything to do with gaming so I like the idea of meeting someone who you know through that world.
Definitely interested in reading more.

[Nariko]

aww thank you :) I already posted 2 chapters. Take your time reading them. I am glad that you like the idea!

[Haniya]

Honestly , i'm so hyped to see what happens next!
Good job making the story so intriguing!

[Nariko]

haha thank you :)

[wordman]

well i believe it will be a best seller

[Nariko]

haha I don't think my story is that good, but thank you :)

[wordman]

you never know,i can see you in new york city in a big office writing books

[Nariko]

haha that would be nice. Maybe in the future x)

[wordman]

got to have faith

[Nariko]

I am working on building more confidence in myself

[AmateurWriter01]

Sounds pretty interesting. I am actually wondering what is going to happen. You never know what the person is like in person. A lot of people hide their true selves behind that computer screen.

[Nariko]

Yes that's true. Thank you for your review!

[Srchaud]

There is a simple charm to the idea. With a lot of potential, this seems very character driven. So as long as your players are all interesting it should be a good story.

[Nariko]

I hope it meets up to your exceptations

[Kayla Amaro]

This is an interesting concept you've come up with here. I'm wondering if you're going to add a twist, like if the guy is someone she's met before or goes to her school, or if he ends up being different than she expected. Either way, it seems Eiko's world is about to open up. I can't wait to read the entire story!

[Nariko]

haha well it will be a twist for the character :) thank you for your review!

[Ember Quinn]

I can't wait to see what you do with this :3 There's so many possibilities. I feel like this can turn out to either be a very heart warming story or a horror/scary story. Either way it sounds great

[Nariko]

Haha thank you! I don't really like horror stories. Just to let you know, I already posted 2 chapters.

[RebeccaRose]

Definitely a cliffhanger, can't wait.

[Nariko]

Haha just to let you know I already posted 2 chapters :) take your time reading them

[Birdwild]

Great piece, very intriguing and engaging.

[Nariko]

Thank you for your review!

[Abraham George]

nice intro. Looking forward for the next chapter.

[Nariko]

Thank you ^-^ I already posted 2 chapters

[Abraham George]

i will read them