My Immortal Chapter 8

AN: stop flassing ok! if u do den u r a prep!

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Everyone in the class stared at me and then Draco came into the room even though he was naked and started begging me to take him back.

“Ebony, it’s not what you think!” Draco screamed sadly.

My friend B’loody Mary Smith smiled at me understatedly. She flipped her long waste-length gothic black hair and opened her crimson eyes like blood that she was wearing contact lenses on. She had pale white skin that she was wearing white makeup on. Hermione was kidnapped when she was born. Her real parents are vampires and one of them is a witch but Voldemort killed her mother and her father committed suicide because he was depressed about it. She still has nightmares about it and she is very haunted and depressed. It also turns out her real last name is Smith and not Granger. (Since she has converted to Satanism she is in Slytherin now not Griffindoor. )

“What is it that you desire, you ridiculous dimwit!” Snape demeaned angrily in his cold voice but I ignored him.

“Vampire, I can’t believe you cheated on me with Draco!” I shouted at him.

Everyone gasped.

I don’t know why Ebony was so mad at me. I had went out with Vampire (I’m bi and so is Ebony) for a while but then he broke my heart. He dumped me because he liked Britney, a stupid preppy f****r. We were just good friends now. He had gone through horrible problems, and now he was gothic. (Haha, like I would hang out with a prep.)

“But I’m not going out with Draco anymore!” said Vampire.

“Yeah f*****g right! F**k off, you b*****d!” I screamed. I ran out of the room and into the Forbidden Forest where I had lost my virility to Draco and then I started to bust into tears.

Reviews

[Ammy]

What the hell is flassing? And again with the swearing. Stop it. You aren't hard. And you aren't funny. Who is editing this for you? Can you get someone to edit who will completely change the story line? Actually, there is no story line.
I'm just glad you finally got to some confrontation(Despite how stupid it is)What is it with you and preps? Seriously, get over it. But apart from that, this was an interesting turn of events and I actually want to see how it turns out. I pray to God(Even though I'm an Atheist.. Which is weird)that it will actually make sense.

[L. C. Rhodes]

Hmm 'Ammy' huh. Are you perhaps reviewing your own stories? If you are then you, sir, are a superior troll.

[chaffy]

this entire book is halirous.. ridiculous... nothing makes much sense.. but i like it.. haha, it is kinda weird but funny.. i am soo glad people edit for you.. i barely make out what you are typing on the top of every story...