Sugar Plum

Sugar Plum

A Poem by Manta Ray Lily
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Just some hardcore memories with my friend written in the form of poem....

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It was just a mere moment we met,
Never knew you would mean so much.
That second I would never regret,
Always by my side to comfort as such.

You chose to be with me at any cost,
Boosted me with pearls of wisdom and trust.
When I speak of you, words are always lost,
And you make me live down to earth and adjust.

Your character reminds me of a sugar plum,
As you do things which make you bolder.
Whenever I try to do my best, I feel numb,
Until you rescue me by lending your shoulder.

Calm, serene and relaxed while it rains,
Below the bright, pretty stars in the night.
Us walking past through the shadows & lanes,
Making me filled with ecstasy and delight.

© 2025 Manta Ray Lily


Author's Note

Manta Ray Lily
Thanks for checking out my poem! All open for your reviews and suggestions.

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Lyrical and moving
Need to have someone to make you feel relaxed and comfortable
"Whenever I try to do my best, I feel numb,
Until you rescue me by lending your shoulder."
Very relatable
The bonds that are needed to stay alive

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manta Ray Lily

3 Weeks Ago

Absolutely, there should be such understanding to have a deep bonding with your friend. Thanks a lot.. read more
A beautiful love poem. Excellent writing

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manta Ray Lily

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks a lot for your sweet comment sir!

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Added on March 18, 2025
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Tags: #Friendship

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Manta Ray Lily
Manta Ray Lily

Hyderabad , Telangana , India



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Good day, everyone! Welcome to my anthology. I just love to put my thoughts with pen and paper and it's been the best hobby I ever had. My inspiration has been "Robert Frost" since two years and from .. more..

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