One of his kind!

All about a person liking someone from a girl's POV....

We felt our love rushing through our veins,

just holding hands of each other on dusky lanes.

Felt his essence as he wrapped me dense and slow,

his breath was intense when he came to me so close.

Dancing while looking at each other with perky eyes,

tryna keep our composure and serenity as time flies.

getting high on tequila while we kissed in the bar,

rhythm of music from behind with an acoustic guitar.

slithering through my curves in warm showers,

rewinding our nasty, old memories for long hours.

under the shadows of the moon, glittered with light,

submerged into each other in the middle of the night.

picture perfect as we watched over sparkly stars,

trying to ease each other’s intimidating scars.

made a promise which shall never be broken,

with a perfect guy who had my heart stolen.

Author's Note

Thanks for checking out my poem! All open for your reviews and suggestions.

Reviews

[Inkspire]

Has a good structure.
The spacing makes as to pause and read. It feels more different there reading it one go.

[Manta Ray Lily]

Thanks a lottttttt!

[JayG]

You need to read the excerpt from Stephen Fry's, The Ode Less Traveled...and format it as a poem.

[Manta Ray Lily]

Thanks a lot for your suggestion, JayG. I will surely look into it.