Gool ol' times....

This poem is about friendship and the obstacles faced during that time.

Dew drops dripping over a delicate daisy,

Buffered with a few bitter moments all hazy.

Sailed in indispensable souvenirs like salt in the sea,

Crossed all the stratified layers to see through me.

More than friends but less than a couple we are,

Hiding all the hardcore memories no matter how far.

vivid Eyes full of stories, divine heart full of delight,

Carved those melancholy thoughts smooth and bright.

At the edge of the celestial moon, the choice awaits,

Turbulent chaos clustered with the written fates.

Poured a whole new hope into the broken soul,

grew an evocative forest with the legitimate goal.

Always grateful for being my unpaid therapist,

together in every formidable problem to assist.

taught me not to give up and continue to fight,

in the end, that’s what makes everything right.

Author's Note

Thanks for checking out my poem! All open for your reviews and suggestions.

Reviews

[Arundass TP]

Emotionally indepth poem. I see hidden meanings so vivid through your poetic lines. Good work friend

[Manta Ray Lily]

Thanks a lot for your sweet comment sir!

[emmajoygreen]

The way your words are laid, what they infer and/or mean, the sway and rock of the meter, the font's size and clarity - great poem. No suggestions from me, I've read twice and smiled, nodding in tune

[Manta Ray Lily]

Pleasure's all mine mam and thanks a lot for your sweet comment! I am so happy you liked it.